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__Tuesday 14 June__

Deep in the Jungle

Wrrrrrrr the whistle goes. “Get up your cabin are the last ones up so you lose 10 points for your cabin” shouts the camp leader. David is the cabin leader and is in charge of the cabin so he gets the blame. David said “Ok boys we need to get driest and get out to the meting spot on the other side of the camp”. Then they got there all of the other cabins where gust leaving for the hike in to the jungle.

Half hour in to the hike the camp leader stopped the gorp and gave them a lesson about what good plants to eat when you are lost in the jungle. “Some of the best plants you can eat when you are lost are the long thin juicy honey suckle and water vines that twist around the inside of a tree like a snake" says the camp leader. When the group was walking through the forest David says to sam “Sam I fort that I saw a wild pig and it thad something around its neck lets go help it”. David and sam snick a way from the group like a mouse trying to get some cheese. They looked and looked but they couldn’t find the pig any where so they when back to the group they were gone. So they run down the track like a spiraling bullet but the track split in to three tracks. “Were lost” weeped Sam “No were not we just have to us the thing that the camp leader had tort as” instructed David. The boys headed down a of the tracks and started running, then sprinting.

Slowly two hours had past and the two boys knew they where lost for shore. David gassed at the Sky and looked at the sparkling sun and say “the time is about 4:00 PM we should site up a camp be for sun set for the night and by the morning the camp should have started looking for us”. David told Sam to go get some dry wood for a fire and he would starts to make a suckle that had he learned from the camp leader.

After the two had finished that they got some fat pieces of bark of trees and they started to walk around and find some water vines and honey suckle. They used the bark for a trail so every two steps they would put one down so they don’t lose their small camp.

“ How many water vines and honey suckle? shouts Sam. “ I have five of each” replies David. They both follow the winding bark trail back to the mini camp they made. As the fire crackles Sam and David drink the water vine and suck on the honey suckle they both say in the morning the camp would of started to look for them. Both of the boys are in the bivaquak and go to sleep.

“I’ve fond them I’ve fond them” Shouts one of the searchers. Leaping over and under logs all of the camp searchers come and help the two boys out of the bivaquak. “ Lets go back and get you boys warm and you can tell as what happen and how you savored the night” the camp leader happily says. “ You boys are going to get the forest badge and the elite camp badge’s for helping each other through the night.

Friday 10 June Deep in the Jungle

Wrrrrrrr the whistle goes. “Get up your cabin are the last ones up so you lose 10 points for your cabin” shouts the camp leader. David is the cabin leader and is in charge of the cabin so he gets the blame. David said “Ok boys we need to get driest and get out to the meting spot on the other side of the camp”. Then they got there all of the other cabins where gust leaving for the hike in to the jungle.

Half hour in to the hike the camp leader stopped the gorp and gave them a lesson about what good plants to eat when you are lost in the jungle. “Some of the best plants you can eat when you are lost are the long thin juicy honey suckle and water vines that twist around the inside of a tree like a snake" says the camp leader. When the group was walking through the forest David says to sam “Sam I fort that I saw a wild pig and it thad something around its neck lets go help it”. David and sam snick a way from the group like a mouse trying to get some cheese. They looked and looked but they couldn’t find the pig any where so they when back to the group they were gone. So they run down the track like a spiraling bullet but the track split in to three tracks. “Were lost” weeped Sam “No were not we just have to us the thing that the camp leader had tort as” instructed David. The boys headed down a of the tracks and started running, then sprinting.

Slowly two hours had past and the two boys knew they where lost for shore. David gassed at the Sky and looked at the sparkling sun and say “the time is about 4:00 PM we should site up a camp be for sun set for the night and by the morning the camp should have started looking for us”. David told Sam to go get some dry wood for a fire and he would starts to make a suckle that had he learned from the camp leader.

After the two had finished that they got some fat pieces of bark of trees and they started to walk around and find some water vines and honey suckle. They used the bark for a trail so every two steps they would put one down so they don’t lose their small camp.

Tuesday 7 June

**MY LEARNING TARGETS** Thanks Daniel this is a good start to your story. I particularly like the beginning but describing the sound from the whistle. This is a short story (500 words) but remember to paint a picture in the readers mind rather than just listing the events in order.

My next step in writing is to develop some descriptive language in my writing.

I will achieve this by including similes, metaphors, personification or the 5 finger rule e.g. "some of the best plants you can eat are the long thin juicy honey suckle and water vines that twist around the inside of a tree like a snake"

Date achieved: //Mrs Stock//

Deep in the Jungle

Wrrrrrrr the whistle goes. “Get up your cabin are the last ones up so you lose 10 points for your cabin” shouts the camp leader. David is the cabin leader and is in charge of the cabin so he gets the blame. David said “Ok boys we need to get driest and get out to the meting spot on the other side of the camp”. Then they got there all of the other cabins where gust leaving for the hike in to the jungle.

Half hour in to the hike the camp leader stopped the gorp and gave them a lesson about what good plants to eat when you are lost in the jungle. “some of the best plants you can eat when you are lost are honey secals and water vine and you can find them in a tree” says the camp leader. When the group was walking through the the forest David says to sam “Sam I fort that I saw a wild pig and it thad something around its neck lets go help it”. David and sam snick a way from the group. They looked and looked but they couldn’t find the pig any where so they when back to the group they were gone. So they run down the track but the track split in to three tracks. “were lost” weeped Sam “No were not we just have to us the thing that the camp leader had tort as” instructed David. The boys headed down a of the tracks and started running then sprinting. Two hours had past and the two boys knew they where lost for shore...

Thursday 2 June Deep in the Jungle

Wrrrrrrr the whistle goes. “Get up your cabin are the last ones up so you lose 10 points for your cabin” shouts the camp leader. David is the cabin leader and is in charge of the cabin so he gets the blame. David said “Ok boys we need to get driest and get out to the meting spot on the other side of the camp”. Then they got there all of the other cabins where gust leaving for the hike in to the jungle.

Half hour in to the hike the camp leader stopped the gorp and gave them a lesson about what good plants to eat when you are lost in the jungle. “some of the best plants you can eat when you are lost are honey secals and water vine and you can find them in a tree” says the camp leader. When the group was walking through the the forest David says to sam “Sam I fort that I saw a wild pig and it thad something around its neck lets go help it”. David and sam snick a way from the group. They looked and looked but they couldn’t find the pig any where so they when back to the group they were gone. So they run down the track but the track split in to three tracks.

Monday 30 May Deep in the Jungle

Wrrrrrrr the whistle goes. “Get up your cabin are the last ones up so you lose 10 points for your cabin” shouts the camp leader. David is the cabin leader and is in charge of the cabin so he gets the blame. David said “Ok boys we need to get driest and get out to the meting spot on the other side of the camp”. Then they got there all of the other cabins where gust leaving for the hike in to the jungle.

Half hour in to the hike the camp leader stopped the gorp and gave them a lesson about what good plants to eat when you are lost in the jungle. “some of the best plats you can eat when you are lost are honey secals and water vine and you can find them in a tree” says the camp leader. When the group was walking through the the forest David says to sam “Sam I fort that I saw a wild pig and it thad something around its neck lets go help it”. David and sam snick a way from the group

Friday 27 May Deep in the Jungle

Wrrrrrrr the whistle goes. “Get up your cabin are the last ones up so you lose 10 points for your cabin” shouts the camp leader. David is the cabin leader and is in charge of the cabin so he gets the blame. David said “Ok boys we need to get driest and get out to the meting spot on the other side of the camp”. Then they got there all of the other cabins where gust leaving for the hike in to the jungle.

Half hour in to the hike the camp leader stopped the gorp and gave them a lesson about what good plants to eat when you are lost in the jungle. “some of the best plats you can eat when you are lost are honey secals and water vine and you can find them in a tree” says the camp leader. When the group was walking through the the forest...

Thursday 26 May Deep in the Jungle

Wrrrrrrr the whistle goes. “Get up your cabin are the last ones up so you lose 10 points for your cabin” shouts the camp leader. David is the cabin leader and is in charge of the cabin so he gets the blame. David said “Ok boys we need to get driest and get out to the meting spot on the other side of the camp”. Then they got there all of the other cabins where gust leaving for the hike in to the jungle.

Half hour in to the hike the camp leader stopped the gorp and gave them a lesson about what good plants to eat when you are lost in the jungle. “One of the best plats you can eat when you are lost

__Monday 23 May__

Deep in the Jungle

Wrrrrrrr the whistle goes. “Get up your cabin are the last ones up so you lose 10 points for your cabin” shouts the camp leader. David is the cabin leader and is in charge of the cabin so he gets the blame. “Ok boys we need to get driest and get out to the meting