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__Monday 14 March __   L.I. We are learning make content relevant and add weight to argument by having an effective position statement, main points, evidence and restatement. Contain elaboration of main points.E ffective position statement:S.C. we can
 * make our position and purpose clear
 * use a rhetorical question
 * include a list of fact/evidence that will be discussed in writing

Restatement, elaboration of main points: S.C. We Can Rimu team Room 41
 * restate my position throughout my writing
 * make a main point and back it up with evidence or statistics
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 Monday 14 March

 Dear Mr Diver

 Last week you gave us a extended morning tea because we got in to class fast and started work the day be for. It would be good if we could have extended morning tea for all of the other morning teas this year. When you were a kid wouldn't you want a extended morning tea?

 It would give the teachers more time to mark there work so they don’t have to do it in class time. It will make the teachers more organized and they will be able to help us more in class when we need help in our work and problems. They could also talk to other teachers and staff members. They will have more time to socialize and have time out of class to relax. The teachers could even play play some rugby or soccer with the kids.

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